Crits After 2 Schemes & Next Step

After the crits with my professor, this will be the scheme that I will be exploring. 

Some suggestions are:

1. Rethink about the shape from the drawdle(derives more from it)
2. Think of different possibilities for the circulation(not just elevators and escalators, but have others such as stairs and ramps for larger group of people move faster in the building.)
3. Connect the building more to the site, maybe make it more linear with the circulation of the site to create better angles of viewpoints

Next moves:

1. Look back to the drawdle and explore it carefully to come up with a more interesting shape of different levels
2. Keep the idea of having transparent large open space
3. Incorporating different ways of circulation in different areas
4. Narrow the building to create a better view of the site  
5. Derives the possibilities of interested interior spaces through the technique of avant-garde film, such as asynchronization/asynchronous sound, fade, framing, shot/reverse shot, zoom and 30-degree shot.