4/5 desk crit

For this new design, I want to work with the idea of continuity where
there is a roof garden for people to walk on. Therefore, I place the
building close to where the stair is, so there's a slope for me to work
with.

Including the roof garden, there are total of five floors. Three floors
are above ground, and two floors below. There are two entrances; one
on the roof where escalators will take you to the lobby, another one is
on the ground floor where people walk down the stairs to enter.

building location

sketches of ideas

roof plan

Second floor plan

B1 floor plan

B2 floor pla

After the crit, one of the suggestions is to organized the plan.
It is too messy, and there are some unnecessary curves.
Additionally, I have way too many elevators.


Next moves:
- reorganize the plan
- think about circulation
- changing the floor heights
- reduce elevators
- think about how the lights can get in